tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15895111.post1127728991262972752..comments2023-11-03T12:44:19.948+01:00Comments on Orwell's Picnic ~: I'm writing a short story.Hilary Jane Margaret Whitehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03771332473693479830noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15895111.post-71708965953102744072008-08-03T17:03:00.000+02:002008-08-03T17:03:00.000+02:00I like it. There's something about the sentence "T...I like it. There's something about the sentence "There was a door, a wooden door with a brass knob." I especially like. Most people I think would have just written "there was a wooden door with a brass knob". That bit of repetition seems to better capture the way a person's perception works. Or maybe the repetition adds a little poetry to your prose.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com